Sunday oh holy Sunday

by lost   Feb 25, 2008


So...here we are huh?
Yea... I can't believe it's ending this way
I know...But I'm sorry but I just don't like you
So you've used me
You could put it like that but it's kinda harsh
That's what it is don't try to make it something better than it is
I'm sorry

Tonight...of all the nights
Sunday oh holy Sunday
Church the sacred place
Did it have to end this way
I needed someone there
To pull my heart together
And hold it firm in place
I needed this to work
Oh you don't know how I needed you to work
I trusted you with my heart
And you threw it down and tore it apart

Tonight...of all nights
Sunday oh holy Sunday
Church the sacred place
Did it have to end this way
Yes I'm afraid it did
For I didn't really like you
I just needed someone there
To wipe away my fears
And help me through the day
Someone I could trust with all my problems
To not judge me for my mistakes
But open your arms and wrap them around
My twisted little heart

Breaking down
We're breaking down
Together we fall forever we break
To watch you drown in these tears I've made
Is tearing my heart right in two
But maybe just maybe we'll make through
With Him on our side and friends on the ready
We'll move on again
To make it through the night
And ultimately our life's

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  • 16 years ago

    by DBM

    Hello! :)

    I really liked it... Except, I feel like it could do without the first stanza. That first part is just a bit hard to follow, and the change in style between the first stanza and the rest of the poem is maybe just too abrupt? I would absolutely love it if it began with that second stanza, although I do appreciate the point you were trying to get across in the first. Maybe you should just give some thought to reformatting that first part so that it blends more smoothly into the body of your poem.

    Still, though, it's really good!
    Best wishes,
    -Mike aka ~DBM~

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