Congratulations, I Hate You

by Jenni Marie   Feb 25, 2008


Don't you find it to be more than a little ironic sweetheart
Smile which melted my heart now makes me withdraw in disgust
Your once sweet eyes showing nothing but love and adoration
Yet I'm suddenly easily able to see the hidden spite behind them

Your {loving} embrace once all that I ever yearned for
Makes me feel poisoned whenever you get that close
Every time you place your sweet tainted lips upon mine
Have to fight the temptation to bite your tongue in half

Tell me how something which was once so pure and right
Has turned into such a deadly, dangerous and bloody war
When there used to be nothing but love and implicit trust
All that's left is dying embers where our fire used to burn

You know what I find so humorous about our situation
So wrapped in all your compulsive lies and false promises
Just don't have a clue how my heart shrivels thinking of you
Finally you went to far, congratulations...revenge is nigh

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Another very powerful poem with alot of hard emotions. You talent in making such a forceful approach is very well played out the vocabulary is good and I liked it all and all Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written. However, I felt it could of been better if you added puncuation within. Overall a great write, the flow was good. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    NOI can defianalty relate to this one, again, sharp wit, and scarsm I think I am beginning to see as pattern here and it works for you, the poem is well penned, the emotion and vocab is powerful, Brillantly written, I am adding you to my favorites, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved it. You put so much emotion into your poems. It was easy to read and to understand. For some reason I really liked the first stanza I think that it might be because I can really relate to it. Everything about this poem was great. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really loved this poem.. it showed all of the love that the person once had and it showed how dark it has become. Nice job. the only thing I can say is that the last word nigh? not to sure what you meant by that but wonderful work on the poem as a whole it really spoke to me.

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