by noha Feb 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I try to sleep last night, |
This is a really pretty poem, I liked the way you put your words 5*5 |
by Not
GOOD POEM(BETTER TO UNDERSTAND IF PUT IN STANZAS)BUT BESIDES THAT ITS A SWEET POEM |
by Maha
I justt love this poemm noha great work! |
by kelly tavern
Hi this poems was goo but not one of my fave from your collection, the vocabulary could do with improving but the meaning of the words themselves are good. keep on writing god poetry hun x |
This poem shows alot of emotion and I can really feel the love (sounds a bit cheesy). But I must say there is 2 faults which is the vocabulary and the text talk using 'u' instead of 'you'. But other than that it was great. 5/5 |