I am/ Yo soy

by Hermosa   Feb 25, 2008


I am the lover, the other woman, the intruder
The one that has no feelings
The one that destroyed a family
The monster that doesn't care of another womans suffering
The one who has to take the humiliation
The one whose needs kill her
The need to feel loved, to feel she is the only one
The one who knows she will never have it
Because she will always be the other woman
The one that doesn't Matter

Yo soy, La amante, La otra, La intrusa
La que no siente
La desgraciada que destruyo un hogar
La perdida que no le importa el sufrimiento de otra mujer
La que aguanta aumillaciones
La que las ganas la mata
Las ganas de sentirse amada, unica
La que necessita atencion, amor
La que sabe que nunca lo tendra completamente
Porque siempre sera La Otra
La Que No Importa.

I had never written something like this I thought it would be interesting to see what all of you thought so please comment to see where I can improve.

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  • 15 years ago

    by albert padilla

    Great poems, love it lol
    very talented

  • 15 years ago

    by Fanny

    Te entiendo mija. Yo asi estoy ahorita! Buen poema. no pares de escribir.
    -Stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Haha....i think the one in spanish is more powerful, and makes more sence then the one in english..i think it has a greater power in spanish.

    but thats just me ;)

    great job!
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    Pretty good poem it did rhymed and you got to the point. thanx for the comment you put in my poem " i have latina spice" well written poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Mommi

    WOW I HAVE BEEN THE OTHER WOMEN BEFORE. SO TRUE I LIKE HOW YOUR WORDS FLOWED.