You'll See

by Suicidal Love   Feb 25, 2008


One day I will find you
And you will pay the price
I'm fed up with your games
No more playing nice

You and solely you
Has screwed up my whole life
Leaving me for dead
The blood, the pain, the knife

It still cuts through my skin
Blade shining in the sun
But don't be fooled my friend
Still you have not won

Ill get through the pain
However hard it be
I don't need you now
Just you watch, you'll see

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiZz

    Super good.......5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Now this is rockin piece *especailly when ur already fueling off some anger* great piece - randrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I love the character portray in here a very determined and a powerful man wanting and ready to strife.. great one, it was flawless

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Nice. ^_^ I quite enjoyed this poem. I like the no more playing nice rhyme the best along with the very last just watch line. Great work. Short yet sweet. A five from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Love it.
    The emotion was shown and the flow was flawless.

    "Has fcuked up my whole life"
    I would change 'fcuked' because even though you have changed the spelling its still against the rules. Either change it or move it to explicit. But its your choice.

    Otherthan that, it was excellent. 5/5

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