by Marc Ortiz
This is a good poem about lost (sp) friendship. I think it flowed well, good job. I have some few suggestions.. Capitalize all the I's and try to use some punctuations - in my opinion a poem is better if it has a lot of punctuation :) |
by Melantha
Great Poem! ^^ |
You have no idea how close this poem hits home.. This actucally made me cry.. Not many poems or movies or anything can do that. Very good.. 5/5 |
by AJ
That was very well written great job |
by desiree
Wow. |
by IML
This poem reminds me of myself. I use to act like the person you are describing and I hated being like that. So much hate and corruption and living with it makes you feel locked up inside cause you cant let something that happened go between you and that person. |