Comments : Say good bye

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This is a good poem about lost (sp) friendship. I think it flowed well, good job. I have some few suggestions.. Capitalize all the I's and try to use some punctuations - in my opinion a poem is better if it has a lot of punctuation :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Melantha

    Great Poem! ^^
    It reminded me of my x-bestfriend.
    She has just been ''Brainwashed'' by one I hate.

    Keep up your good work ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    You have no idea how close this poem hits home.. This actucally made me cry.. Not many poems or movies or anything can do that. Very good.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ

    That was very well written great job

    (you got a comment from the famous AJ lol)

  • 16 years ago

    by desiree

    Wow.
    Good poem; I could relate.

    5/5
    Keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    This poem reminds me of myself. I use to act like the person you are describing and I hated being like that. So much hate and corruption and living with it makes you feel locked up inside cause you cant let something that happened go between you and that person.
    Thanks for you comment and rating! :)
    I'm glad you liked my poem and I love all your writing. Keep it up! :)