Her Room

by Beautiful Forever   Feb 26, 2008


"NO!" She screams inside her head,
"I don't want to end up dead",
"Why does it have to be this way?",
"I want to live another day",

All she can see is an empty room,
The one that holds her certain doom,
Locked inside this empty cell,
She doesn't have enough energy to yell,

Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide,
She knows her heart has finally died,
With no one there to hold her hand,
No other soul could possibly understand,

Having no one to say goodbye,
She's too scared to even cry,
Losing all sense of hope,
It was too much for her to cope,

Staring around for her last sight,
She's decided to forfeit the fight,
She finds the floor and rests her head,
Now she lays there, cold and dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow...that was powerful!!!!!!!!!!!! this poem was filled of surprising thougths and all the words that had been described was really so true in real life! great portraying this thoughts.... that was absolutely dark poems and a bit scared me.. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by barbara

    This poem has a great flow to it and is very emotional. i love the ending the most because it kind of adds that last pinch of darkness to the poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing, the imagery was fantastic and I loved the way you moved on bit by bit. This makes it easier for the reader to understand. The wording was great and the ending was fabulus. This is the best poem I read today, except the one I wrote (joke) (: Good job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Very good poem.. the flow seemed a bit forced but besides that its a job well done. keep up the good work. i can really relate to this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Emotional ...
    this is a emotional poetry... I like it :)

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