What Makes Me?

by Dying Beautifully   Feb 26, 2008


Someone asked me a question the other day,
Why do you love him so.
And all I could say,
Made them know.

I said I love you because your all I need,
You keep me warm.
You gave me your hearts deed,
All around be you swarm.

I said that wasn't all,
I love you because your not average.
Yes your tall,
But you don't go on an every day rampage.

I love you because you talk to me,
But it's me that does the talking.
Because I truly believe your the one to be,
And feel it when we're walking.

When I was finally done,
And they got my answer.
The smile from their face shone,
Like a small dancer.

They told me something this great comes only once,
To hold on to it as tight as I can.
But don't sqeeze or I will be the dunce,
I told them that wasn't in my plan.

Later that night you came online,
All I could so was stare and shine.
I love you and will never let go,
You are the one and only from the first moment the "Hello".

I love you Connor these have been the most amazing four months of my life and I look forward to many more<3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Connor

    I love you Baby great poem, I thought yopu were done, but yet again you amaze me The fourth month is great, and many more will come! I love you!

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetGurl

    Wow its soo cute i can really relate to this one

  • 16 years ago

    by brittany19

    I like this one alot! I know how you feel