Lovers song

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Feb 26, 2008


As I stare into your eyes
I felt your soft kiss
This is heaven
This is simply bliss

We wove between us
The magic known by every lover
The greatest feeling ever felt
That can be replaced by no other

Where would I be
Without your hand in mine
Without you all the money in the world
Doesn't mean a dime

Life without you
Is full of unhappiness and deceit
So let us continue our lovers song
Of heavy breathing and fast heartbeats

P.S i just felt this coming. i stopped in the middle of a test to write this hope you like it

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  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Aw if you stoped in the middle of a test to write this you must really like the person you wrote this to. nice poe=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Inspiration comes at the weirdest of times, agreed. That was again very nicely written, i'm really liking your writing style. That one made me smile. Thats one thing I've noticed you can write in many different styles.

    keep it up
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Awww i thought was very sweet! nice flow and nice chosing of words keep it up!
    5/5 always
    Kate~