Comments : Time is up

  • 16 years ago

    by stargirl49

    .wow. amazing poem! it's so sweet!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Jason this is written very well. Rhyme and flow fit perfectly together.

    my time is up, ive used my clock
    my life has ticked, its final tock
    ^^
    Love the ending.

    Em