Comments : Pitiful Mistake

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Awww, This is so sad.
    -hugs- I wanna cry for you.

    This poem is amazing though, I must admit. The Imagrey is there and its strong.
    I Love it!
    5/5
    Keep it up!

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    This paints another picture in my mind, this one makes me cry and will cry the day away. Miss Elf, to mt heart, you are just so worth saving! *hugs you tightly* Just a touch a depression and misery but its just plain amazing. Keep your head up high and just smile for that missing strength.

    Love you Miss Elf :D

    CourtneyxHolland

    ~~5/5~~

  • 16 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Really amazing poem!! 5/5