Simple poem

by Lizaveta   Feb 26, 2008


Smiling in the morning,
Sheding tears at night.
In the darkness searching
For a ray of light.
I'm tired of this hiding
From everything I feel.
I'd better start some fighting
But nothing's harder
Then myself fighting against me.

summer 07

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  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow...this poem i can definitely relate too. good job and its really awesome good job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Short and sweet...

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    "I'd better start some fighting
    But nothing's harder
    Then myself fighting against me."

    I don't know if it was your wording or what but the flow was off but all in all it was a good poem.Short but to the point.4/5

    <3Amber

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