Thoughts of you on my mind

by falln angel with broken wings   Feb 26, 2008


I lay on my Flore wishing you would walk through my door.your lips taste so sweet, you look at me the way you do my heart skips a beat.

your sent lingers on my skin.
when you told me you loved me you made my heart Begin.
i am yours and you are mine.
in each others hearts is WHERE we will lie.
i will love YOU until i die...

this ones for my baby stevan ritter

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ares

    Very good poem, you keep impressing:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Dave

    (change this, cause I think you left this out
    But over all, this is very very good and it's stright to the point and precise on fellings! Good job and I personly like it cause I feel the same way with some of my partners in the past ; )

    "in each others hearts is WHERE we will lie.
    i will love YOU until i die...

    (check you later and good job again!)

    -David

  • 17 years ago

    by StandStill

    Love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dave

    I love this. Good job =)

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