Thoughts of you on my mind
by falln angel with broken wings Feb 26, 2008
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I lay on my Flore wishing you would walk through my door.your lips taste so sweet, you look at me the way you do my heart skips a beat. |
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16 years ago
by Ares
Very good poem, you keep impressing:)
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16 years ago
by Dave
(change this, cause I think you left this out
But over all, this is very very good and it's stright to the point and precise on fellings! Good job and I personly like it cause I feel the same way with some of my partners in the past ; )
"in each others hearts is WHERE we will lie.
i will love YOU until i die...
(check you later and good job again!)
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16 years ago
by StandStill
Love it.
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16 years ago
by Dave
I love this. Good job =)
