I love this. Good job =)

Love it.

(change this, cause I think you left this out
But over all, this is very very good and it's stright to the point and precise on fellings! Good job and I personly like it cause I feel the same way with some of my partners in the past ; )

"in each others hearts is WHERE we will lie.
i will love YOU until i die...

(check you later and good job again!)

-David

Very good poem, you keep impressing:)