by joe m durham Feb 26, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Your playing over and over all in my head |
by danielle
OH MY GOD JOE!!! THIS IS SOOOOO AWESOME IM PROUD OF U WERE GETTING BETTER EVERY TIME I READ ONE OF YOUR POEMS!!!!! WOW THERE MUCH BETTER THAN MINE SO YEA |
by oddi tea
Sad, but i like it. it is short but still packed with emotion. great rhyme scheme and i think it was well thought out. Great job! Keep writting. 4/5 |