Sad, but i like it. it is short but still packed with emotion. great rhyme scheme and i think it was well thought out. Great job! Keep writting. 4/5

OH MY GOD JOE!!! THIS IS SOOOOO AWESOME IM PROUD OF U WERE GETTING BETTER EVERY TIME I READ ONE OF YOUR POEMS!!!!! WOW THERE MUCH BETTER THAN MINE SO YEA