One Word: WOW!
This Poem...It's so vivid in my mind as i read it. It is amazing. The emotion is there completely, I Must say. It's difficult not to be amazed by this poem.
Hope you're ok though <3
5/5
Keep it up!

Take Care
-Ally

Thats a great poem.

I think you need to work on syllables. just my opinion. but if this is about your gf, i advise you not to show her. that would be kind of cruel. and youre not alone.

--TheGothicAlbino

I reread this today, monthes since i read anything youve written. i love it. but then, it gives me the right to call you a hypocrite. it really is beautiful.

--TheGothicAlbino