So far, this is my favorite poem written by you. I mean, all of your works are great, but this one is by far the one that I can relate to right now...
"I'm pecking all who come around me.
Fear that if they get to close, they'll smother me."
^^favorite part (can easily relate)
Also the way it was laid off was perfect. Loved EVERYTHING about it. Great Job once again =}

xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx

I liked that alot, very vivid in my imagination and very true. i love your use of ideas:)

This is a very good poem! Alot of imagination put into this... you feel trapped and not being able to breath and just want out... but dont know how... thats a great poem!