I love the metaphore. The way you viewed love like a game of tag..ive never seen it done before.. i really enjoyed this one.

*Sigh* I experience this too a game of tag with the one you love.. it sucks right?

anyway I think the poem flowed nicely, good job. btw in the title you don't need to put a period :)

In my opinion people shouldn't use periods in their title. anyway keep up the good work!

sorry for the late RRC