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by Mandy Feb 26, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / about death
A love so deep, so divine thrashing at her battered heart She searches for excuses Of why her world was torn apart. Trying to release her pain Still not knowing how thinking of that boy she loved Wishing he could see her now. Black tears stained her pillow Scars painted on her skin Blood red letters streaked the wall Of the thoughts she held within. "No more loving, no more pain Goodbye, it's all his fault." She stared there at her masterpiece As her life came to a hault. Puddles surrounded her bloody face from the tears she had cried She lay there looking cold and limp The knife there by her side.-------------------------- i'm not emo. and i'd never kill myself. i just kinda had an urge to write a suicide poem. comment and rate please!
by Beth
That was very dark and emo. I can kinda relate to this one because I almost got that far one day. Very well written. Beth
by Texastar
Very dark, almost emo but not quite. Bravo! *claps*