Wow..i could feel the intensity of this poem. very good job in expressing your feelings. love the poem, good job!

Ooh damn, u did tough and straight up poem!

Nice poem well im sorry okay idk if yull forgive me but i am ok ...

Hiya,

Wow, what a powerful poem. I bet you're glad that's all out!

Take care
Michael

Omg im so sorry i didnt know you were talking to him too...well you could have him cuz im done with him...everything you just wrote now im feeling it too...but i wasnt talking to anyone else but him i was actually turning down someone who really does love me for that fool...i regret it now...i hope your okay...i didnt know i was hurting you...i know how it feels to have your heart broken it doesnt feel good...ive been there way too many times...i hope everything turns out okay with you...

I get the whole emotions thing now its a good poem

Like this
see what you mean
great poem

i'm sorry but i'm crap at giving improvements

Good one....
i like it

keep writing ^^

I like you're poem i think it has alot of emotions in it but mainly power and thats awsome i hope everything is better for you now.

5/5

Hey im lala..
omg this is all me!
i love youre words in this poem! =]]

I think its wondeful that you could express all of your feelings like that in a poem ...it sounds very direct and to the point.. I like it

I like this poem because, thats how i feel a lot of times towards the girls ive been around. haha
nice one.

Im fricken in love wif this poem!!!!!!!
guys treat us like toys and were not..were not some sorta fricken object to replace there lonley feelings that there hidind behind!!
i love this poem