It's very good! I really like the whole concept. Truly beautiful with a well done twist.
*ME*

I absolutly love it, I sang it as a slow country song right from the start without even reading that comment till the end. The flow was good and the choice of words was great. Amazing write.

Peace, Joe

Excellent song !!
great write
i'm just not sure about this line :
' "I can't believe this is happening." A tear drips down her cheek ' whether it fits the rhythm or not but maybe when it's sang it's ok
overall, 5/5

I really like this one. I'd love to hear what it's like with the music and all. I really really like the 1st verse too. 5/5

I think if Caleb can sing as good as you write that he will be a sure winner! Verse 2 really chocked me up, but you wrote it perfectly.

That is an awesome song!!!!!! the best of luck for caleb! :) i understand how you wanted it to go and sound like.... its pure perfection.
naners
5/5! :))

Love the chorus...pretty good song-really sad

Cutee

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Amazing.
I love it, it's a perfect country song =]

Wow this is a well put together song, i cant wait to hear him sing it :)
the chorus is my fav bit of it
excellent work
5/5

Aww this was so heartbreakingly sad! You truly did evoke emotion in me which made me more connected with the piece. It flowed flawlessly and nothing seemed forced where the imagery was just amazing. Good luck to your friend on Idol! Well done *5/5*

Excellent I thought it was really good. The words flowed well and it had passion and depp meaning. I loved the chorus and the imagery you put into. Excellent work, keep it up 5/5

Yea its for me!!! ik love it also mabe we can get music to it soon at least b4 next yr love ya CAleb

I sill and always will ove it lol love caleb