You're The Color Illumintating My Sky

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Feb 27, 2008


I would give anything,
To be by your side at this moment.
You are the one in my thoughts,
Since the last time we saw each other.
I miss your sweet laugh,
Looking at myself through your eyes,
And know what you're thinking.
I miss the warmness of your hands,
Taking them in my hands.
I would give anything,
To hear the sweet tone of your voice,
When you pronounce my name.
To take you into my arms,
And whisper in your ear,
Over and over again,
How much I love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    I love you too baby! Muah!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    I like this poem alot. It is one of your poems I like the most. You have a great flow through most of it, Which is the kind of flow I hope to see in your future work.

    "I miss the warmness of your hands,
    Taking them in my hands."
    I do feel this part damaged the flow a little as I think it would have sounded smoother saying "taking them in mine" instead.
    Try to work on not using the same word more than once in a sentence.
    I am giving this a 5/5, not because I hope you will rate my poems with a 5/5, but because I honestly enjoyed this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    So beautiful, nice flow, i love it so sweet 5 /5

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