So beautiful, nice flow, i love it so sweet 5 /5

I like this poem alot. It is one of your poems I like the most. You have a great flow through most of it, Which is the kind of flow I hope to see in your future work.

"I miss the warmness of your hands,
Taking them in my hands."
I do feel this part damaged the flow a little as I think it would have sounded smoother saying "taking them in mine" instead.
Try to work on not using the same word more than once in a sentence.
I am giving this a 5/5, not because I hope you will rate my poems with a 5/5, but because I honestly enjoyed this poem.

I love you too baby! Muah!!