This is a very pretty poem. Inspiring, to say the least. Awesome work. Keep it up. =]

Excellent I loved it, I thought it was a nature poem at the start but then it changed to a life section poem. I loved the style and the rhyming was excellent, sometimes you might have had maybe a syllable too much somewhere but it was really good and I enjoyed it. I might even try this style myself. 5/5

Very vivid, nice work

I really love this poem <333

Great poem...brilliant flow and use of words

This is really amazing. I haven't been on this website for years, but I remembered you and your writing, because you were really important to me and helped me a lot in my difficult times. This poem really shows how you have grown as a writer. I'm speechless. I love this line:

While the glory of humanity
Crumbles
Under progression's oppressive weight.

Thanks hunni, that really means a lot.