Wow, effective ending!
I truly enjoyed in every line, you created so captivating rhythm in entire piece and few lines are totally amazing!
Bravo, excellent piece, it has good original wording and truly vivid imagery. You also expressed emotions greatly.

"Pity's cheap,
I give you none,
Live with all,
The things you've done."

Ouch! The venom! This is my favourite stanza. The anger and sheer bitterness in this poem along with the great pace make it completely awesome. 5/5

Em xXx