I like it alot

That was awsume.... actually turned me on loL 5/5 xx leah

I love it got so turned on im bi and i was like if only i was there...lol

Wow, complete turn on, i agree with briana, if only i was there,lol

I'm like really turned on now after reading this and ur other poem. lol I thought that this 1 was better than ur other 1 bcuz of the fact that u were a lot more vivid. I loved it. lol Wanna come over? ;) lol j/t No but this was really good. The only thing that I suggest is that u should break it up in2 stanza's. I think that it would look a lot better that way. But 5/5

Wow think youve turned me haha god.. well done!!

Omg i freakin loved this.. im so wet

Holy crap, your one imaginative chick. If this really happened then god i wish i was there. Gee, keep up the good work on the writing and the actual intercourse.

Sorry i havent been on in a while !
this is real.
my gf and i are really adventurous.

Wow, it turned me on!

Dam! I luved it! it turnd me on!
5/5

NICELY DONE!!