I made a mistake

by CODACHROME   Feb 27, 2008


At night I cry myself to sleep
Praying that my dreams are deep
My dreams are my energy they give me life
They Sharpen my pain like the edge of a knife

Life is never what you expect
The past and memories I will not forget
I've made mistakes as we can see
So when I cry just leave me be

Our love and friendship may be broken
My heart and body, your only token
I see your face in the back of my mind
The Joy and happiness I can not find

I close my eyes I see your tears
I see you cry, Im facing fears
My heart aches to see your pain
I hide my tears with nothing to gain

I could say I'm sorry I could hold you tight
Babe I wuldnt mean it, it wuldnt be right
I love you forever and I always I will
The pain will always be there the void I can not fill

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  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I could say I'm sorry I could hold you tight
    Babe I wuldnt mean it, it wuldnt be right
    I love you forever and I always I will
    The pain will always be there the void I can not fill

    ^ Some people are picky when they read poems, wouldn't is spelled wrong. Just thought I'd point that out incase someone bashes you for it lol :)

    I really enjoyed this...you have really good flow to your poems...its sad to me..I'm recently going through a rough time with my love and this poem just reminded me of my feelings...good work again!
    Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Zvetty

    AMAZING ..... you almost made me cry...
    i realy agree with what you say... i used to feel like that... you brought back memories ...

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Ooh wow.. This is real deep! You thought the best choices of words! Awesome!!! So strong flow smoothhh

  • 16 years ago

    by deadly sun

    I like it, it creates a vivid image in my head and i hope you keep the writting up as its very good:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    The rhyme, rhythm and flow are perfect. Message is honest and from the heart, I love it. My favourite lines were:

    "I could say I'm sorry I could hold you tight
    Babe I wuldnt mean it, it wuldnt be right"

    5/5

    Em xXx

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