The rhyme, rhythm and flow are perfect. Message is honest and from the heart, I love it. My favourite lines were:

"I could say I'm sorry I could hold you tight
Babe I wuldnt mean it, it wuldnt be right"

5/5

Em xXx

I like it, it creates a vivid image in my head and i hope you keep the writting up as its very good:)

Ooh wow.. This is real deep! You thought the best choices of words! Awesome!!! So strong flow smoothhh

AMAZING ..... you almost made me cry...
i realy agree with what you say... i used to feel like that... you brought back memories ...

I could say I'm sorry I could hold you tight
Babe I wuldnt mean it, it wuldnt be right
I love you forever and I always I will
The pain will always be there the void I can not fill

^ Some people are picky when they read poems, wouldn't is spelled wrong. Just thought I'd point that out incase someone bashes you for it lol :)

I really enjoyed this...you have really good flow to your poems...its sad to me..I'm recently going through a rough time with my love and this poem just reminded me of my feelings...good work again!
Chelsey