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by Jessica Feb 27, 2008 category : Love, romance / desired love
I feel the tension between us The unsaid lies turned into mush. The wild gasps of air you take The unsteady hand that shakes. You asked me if I meant it I told you it was a skit. Your lips land on mine But I feel the disdain and push you aside. We never understood this baffling affair As out fingers interlaced knowing we were about to start all over with this despair.
by Jessica
Thank you so much! This was my first two poems and I was a little effy with them. I normally write stories, so this means a lot to me. Thanks again Noor!
by Goodbye
Very interesting poem. I am fascinated by how you describe the moment. Nice work.