Feel Free to Read, Rate, and Comments my poems... and if you have anysuggestion then please feel free to tell me...

- Sumit Ojha

Very dark. I would have loved it to be a bit longer though. But you were very descriptive of this woman.
i suggest for this line
"full blood red lipspart"
you put a space between lips and part
"full blood red lips part"

otherwise i liked it
5/5

I like the beginning, it's dark and intriguing
and also your choice of words is great
the way u seprate a sentence into lines is unusual but i like it
i just think you can develop this poem, make it a bit longer, maybe develop description of the woman which is btw very well-done or description of night or something like that

Hmm to be honest im not giving it 5/5 coz its not ur best. the words seem so dark and filled w/ emotions but though still need to work out.. well im going to read some just to be fair ok.. 4/6

takecare

Hmm to be honest im not giving it 5/5 coz its not ur best. the words seem so dark and filled w/ emotions but though still need to work out.. well im going to read some just to be fair ok.. 4/6

takecare

I like this one. It's very decriptive, very dark. I would have liked to see it a bit longer tho. 4/5

This poem was absolutely amazing! It sent a shiver down my spine... The flow was great, the word choice made the poem very descriptive to the point I could feel every word, and the concept was nothing short of brilliant! 5/5 Keep it up

The imagery in this poem is AWESOME! My favourite lines were:

"Evil shrouds her walking form,
a timeless wanting."

A great title that matches the content of the poem without being repeated. An irregular structure that has the ability to be disastrous but works really really well. 5/5

Em xXx

I thought this was really good.. It's very discriptive.. I thought the structure was really good for this poem.. The flow was awesome.. Maybe if it was a little longer then it would be better.. But it's one of those poems that could stand like it is now..
anyway 5/5..

Very sad. I loved the opening it caught my eye instantly and the imagery was fantastic. The ending was ok but not satisfyin enough for me. But it was a really good poem.

Vampyrism is always cool, a really great poem.

Wow. Nice.

xxx.

That confused me, but i like the last line :]

Excellently done. I enjoyed reading this piece. It was well worded and had good imagery and the ending was amazing. 5/5

Very beautifully done my friend! Your imagry was portrayed wonderful! i loved it. and you were also so descriptive in your work. Sometimes when we use imagery or very descriptive words the words lose power or meaning, but not in this case. the poem was all around powerful and kept my attention through out the piece. I read it like 4 times because i kept on wanting to read more. My only suggestion is to make it longer, because it leaves the reader hungry for more. But you did wonderful! keep up the freaking amazing work! :]

Nice work i love it

This poem... was so well written! The imagery you create was just phenomenal! It was subtle but very beautiful. It was a very dark poem, and my only suggestion would be to make it a little bit longer, as long as it doesn't ruin the feel of the poem. I want to read more, it was just so well done that I was like "its over? :(" lol. Again, that was amazing, amazing work.
5/5

A beautifully penned poem! I loved the descriptions in this poem, I felt as though this woman was coming towards me! Excellent work! 5/5

I liked it....it had amazing imagery....good work

Well, this poem was better than the one I just read. This one showed more feeling and the flow worked perfectly. I really liked this one. Great job!! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.