Razorblade Kisses

by Onoitsmandie   Feb 27, 2008


Razor blade Kisses
Haunting my dreams
Twisting in this blinding light
Nothing what it seems

Life sucked out of you
by razor blade tears
they fall and cut your cheeks
as they have for many years

Razor blade Kisses
blood on the floor
what started with a slit
has turned into so much more

Life it is slipping
no more lies no more wishes
i saved my last breath
For my Razor blade Kisses

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Oh and one more thing while I'm thinking about it.You shouldn't capitalize 'kisses' it throws the flow off.

    -Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    It was rather short but, good.I think tha you should capitalize the beginning of ever sentence though to make the poem seem more organized.In the first stanza, last line, I think you should change 'nothing' to "nothing's".In your last stanza,first line, you should put a comma after 'life' to better the organization again.Just a few suggestions but good poem though.

    -Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Ariana Mejia

    Good job:)it was a great choice with words..

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