Some days you want
me
and some days, I think you don't
care.
PERFECT LINE

Its very well writen. good job!

Thats a great poem. happens to me alot... things go great i think and then they turn bad. but luckily i have been with this man for a few months now and nothing is wrong and nothing will go wrong we are perfect. keep up . hun thingsll get better!

keepsmilin.
xox
shanna

Nice peom. good job !