by No one
I reallly like that idea of the rhetorical questions that no-one can truly answer, you missed the word 'do' in the 2nd line of first stanza! =D |
by JEFF
Great write, loved it. 5/5 |
by Lemma
I love the repetition and the use of opposites. The flow is great and so is the rhyme. My favourite stanza is the last one, it's a great way to end with the feeling of either being safe forever or just falling. 5/5 |
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! |
by JustKristina
Okay so this on is a awesome! i loved it! Wonderful way of putting questions that everyone wants to ask into a simple poem. It was an amazing read that flowed very nicely. You did great, on everything, the rhymes, flow, word choice, okay, you get it! lol keep it up! :] |
by noha
Waw , i love it, realy nice work5/5 |
A very interesting piece. I loved the way you worded it and the vocabulary you used. Again, the flow was flawless. This piece is simple, but expressed so much. Another amazing piece. 5/5. |
Very beautiful poem... It's emotional and the words portray such a beautiful feeling. The flow was great... and the concept is common, but never old. I really love this poem! 5/5 |