by Dave Feb 27, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
(please read this and tell me what you think, I ask that you be honest and any tips would be nice and please feel free to critique me with any thing you would change for better flow. thanks) |
Beautiful! This Is A Touching Poem. My Only ProblemWith it Is That You May Want To Proofread. There were Gramatical Errors But Other then that, Nothing really Needs To Be Changed. =] I Enjoyed The Lovely Read. |
by Sammerz
Awwww..this poem was so cute i liked it and you can feel your emotions in it |
Much better i love it even more |
Awww sad but i love it...ive been there so many times.... |