Untrue Hideous Shrew

by BurriedFaceDown   Feb 27, 2008


We are in the car
It's raining out there,
And I am crying in here

You hurt me, again
You try to explain

But I can't hear you,
All I can hear is the ringing in ears,
Still vivid from the your blow

I am grateful that I can't hear you,
You untrue hideous shrew!

You hurt me time after time,
And it isn't just you, but also your partner in crime

Your friend laughs at my hurt,
But first he'll excessively flirt,
Then picks me up, just to hurl me at the dirt

I take my leave now
You disgusting cow
To think, we almost shared vows

Looks whose weak now
I shall leave with a bow

And my new yet small dignity

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I love this. It shows that people that go through violence usually come out stronger, not that this excuses it. 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is good. very sad.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Angel

    That poem is good. it shows how u truly feel, and lets people know whats goin on. keep on writing
    TiNkErBeLl

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Yeah some of it seem like you were trying a little to hard. try to seperate it more like,
    one sentense
    one ryhme
    one sentense
    one ryhme

    it doesn't come accros as if your trying to hard that way.
    but if the sentenses are long then you have to push for every line more then but let it flow and feel what your writing and people will enjoy it more. but great poem good thought. 5/5

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