Wen an angel falls

by Angel Demetrice   Feb 27, 2008


Looking through his tears
the falling of feathers he hears
white colors come down like rain
black ones he has gain
while the ground turns white
he can feel love leaving his side
with black wings he now learns to fly
angering looking at the blue sky
evil crawls in his mind
abandoning him from his own kind
Dark songs he now sings
he is a fallen angel with black wings,

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  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    I like it ((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Whoa u relate things without really saying it and its hard 2 do that most of the time. great write!
    keep it ^^!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awww, that's so sad, I like the medaphorical phrases you used ... awsome

  • 16 years ago

    by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave

    Love the poem. I felt like I was there and watch the Angle fall.

    5/5

    ~Victoria

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    My fallen one

    You are my angle
    when you saw me crying by the lake
    my last and only resting place
    you walked over and lifted my head
    looked into my eyes
    i could tell you saw my pain and more
    you saw a flame
    small yet still burning
    all you had to do was find the key and unlock the door
    you kissed me on the lips
    ever so gently
    we both have nothing to loose but all to gain
    now its 2 fallen angles
    sitting by the lake at night
    looking at the stars together
    holding each other tight

    i will never leave you alone
    i will always be there for you
    like you are there for me
    i love you

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