Comments : Me and the moon.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    I liked this a lot. Most of us question our place in the scheme of things from time to time and you have rendered this question in a very thoughful and lyrical way.The last verse is achingly sad but beautiful at the same time.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Loved the chioce of wording youv'e used
    =]
    Excellent poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Goodness Hun,
    I do love you writting, it never seizes to capture me. This was quite the beautiful write, excellent imagery with a nice errie sense of peace.

    Well Done As always Girl.
    5/5 --Elly.