Abstract lovely

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Feb 28, 2008


Why do I lie to myself
Telling myself you're worth my pain
When you want me to tell you whats wrong
For your own good I must refrain

Because you're everything thats wrong with me
You are my vital flaw
You make me so tense
I have stress fractures in my jaw

I'm done being your pet
I got my own life to live
And the way you treat me
Is something I can't forgive

You think you're beauty is whats stopping me
But if you want to know the fact
You're beauty can be described as
Lovely in abstract

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Wow I needed to read this. I'm having a crappy day and this helped. Thank you for writing this. :-) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by c 0 n f u s e d

    All i can say is WoW!

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    I know this feeling! I just never dared to say I sometimes felt like that in my relationship, that ended a month ago..Even though you love someone, that person can still make you feel, like.. sh*t. xD
    Anyway, lovely poem, nice choice of words and I can totally relate.
    5/5
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Woooooooooow
    thats a great one
    keep it up

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Hmm, that was very beatifu, you definatley have a gift with words. I found no flaws that I could see, they're probably were some, don't get me wrong, but every poem and every-thing in life isn't without its flaws... great job, it was once again really great.

    yours truly
    polaroid