Oh my Elly! thats is evidence of true talent right there!
Simply Breathtaking!
Wonderful.
Beautiful imagery, and a clear message.
Absolutally wonderful.
Love your pieces SO much.
Kat xxx

Wow.Simply incredible.It doesn't have that much structure but it doesn't need too.Actually I think that adds to it.It's kind of like I could see this girl; pacing, worrying, wondering if she lost her love.The ending was beautiful.I love the lines: "The pages of our love with be ripped to shreds, as our hearts tear apart.
And the soft song we once sang, will become a twisted lullaby"
It's just so amazing.Another 5/5.You've got talent.
Keep writing,
Rado