Laughing is what I desire,
Trying to feel happy with stupid jokes,
At the same time I remember the one I've always admired,
In tears I soak...

^ This is my fave lines..Simple words were used that made the poem an easy read...The words and rhymes used fitted so well...

I can mirror how sad you u were while writtin this down..Its funny how one person absence makes one lonely and blue while there are millions of funny things around..

Good Job..

Laughing is what I desire,
Trying to feel happy with stupid jokes,
At the same time I remember the one I've always admired,
In tears I soak...

^ These are my fave lines..Simple words were used that made the poem an easy read...The words and rhymes used fitted so well...

I can mirror how sad you u were while writtin this down..Its funny how one person absence makes one lonely and blue while there are millions of funny things around..

Good Job..