I know from where its coming and though i feel bad but at the same time am glad that you atleast released.
very nicely written dear and every word express PAIN that you go through everyday.
prayers and pain...both are heard if you keep your faith.

all the best and take care dear

Cindy,

The poem is beautiful in all it's sadness.
I am so glad for you that you have found a way to express your pain.

*hugs you tight*

Love,

5/5 Ingrid

Sad and heart touching yet so beautifully done.

I feel your pain dear friend and wish upon every star that I could take it away hun.
It saddens me to not only read the sadness in your words but hear the pain in your voice also.
Many thoughts and prayers for you my dear friend
Love ya
Luanne

Cindy...hope you are soon well and the pain subsides...I love you! Nicely written poem....can feel your pain and misery in your lines....

A sad reality, it speaks volumes. Excellent job on the poem, I wish I could take away your pain. I love you Aunt Cindy!!!!

PUTS ME IN THE MIND OF ONE OF MY WRITES: "UNHEARD CRIES" OR ANOTHER "SILENT CRIES".

Congrats Cindy on the contest win!!!! Well derserved!!!!

Godd job!!!...great emotion in it!!!..keep on writing..!!!5/5

Wow that was simply amazing! :) I have no idea why some people didn't vote it as a 5/5. There are no flaws in this poem, well done :)

Sad but really great !
5/5

This to me is what someone thinks before they write a sad poem, ive always been trying to write something close to this but it never works out, i really enjoyed this piece quite sad though nice job 5/5

Cindy dear,
first of all, congrat for the top three...

This was beautiful sad penned you portrait here, beautiful sad written, yet you touch the heart reader, be sure take good care of yourself, i'll comes again soon. hugs!

Bert

Gr8 poem cindy
very sad but it touched my hart
love ur work

xx

Omg this is so emotional... thats exactly how I feel sometimes

I love ur poems so much

Well that was really good! i love then end of it the last part it was really good! good job!

That was expressed well...
<3 I loved it.
=]

VERY NiiCE! ii LOVED iiT.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I like this one..
very sad..
but very good!!!
<3