Great poem.
like really good.

really loved the 3rd stanza, especially the last 2line,
/Dreams bring some peace
To a tortured souls mind/

Really good

This peom is relatable. i love it.

Your words are brilliant.
=]

excellent, must i say.

This is a really deep poem, filled with lots of emotion, love it keep them coming

Now i have read what you have been through your poem is very sad.....brilliant though

Aswome! Totally! Congrats on the win too. You did a wonderful job! 5/5

Thats a well deserved win. very good poem :D
congrats :D

A beautiful very well written poem...5/5
I love all that you write

How could I read this poem without crying? Very touching. You are the best poetess on my list.

I liked it very much. How true are the words being said!!

Fantastic... i loved the expression and the way you made this poem. 5\5 very good!

Beautiful.
honestly beautiful!

It was beautifully written that i must admit.

it was a raw piece of work, i read some of your other poems and this has to be the most emotional piece you have. i can't actually find a fault with it.

i did comment on this before but not an actual proper indetail comment.

in my opinion the last stanza is the strongest, but the 3rd is the most emotiol.

anyway well done. good poem x

A fantastic read. I never had one moment where the flow bothered me. Your theme is excellent as well as your word choice. Superb job on this piece, I am sure I will read more from you. This is really amazing work. Excellent!

Hi,
I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
Thanks

OmG...that was..gosh!! Amazing!!!!
heartwrenshing!!!!
I love it so much, the ending stanza is so perfect for me
this is kind od a late comment, but for me its never too late =)
keep writing beautiful xx

I can't imagine the pain and hurt. But you darling expressed it wonderfully! God Bless and keep typing. Your words are the release expressions of ones saddness, pain, love and hope. You're in my prayers. STAY STRONG

This was great Cindy. I could feel your physical pain as well as your emotional pain. I know where you come from in many of these verses, I too, have felt this way at many points in my life. Keep your chin up, you are very strong :)

Well, im not sure if i commented on this poem before, but it doesnt matter. this poem took my breath away! it was amazing. filled with such emotions. i loved it alot.

Sleep the only comfort
Yet so hard to find
Dreams bring some peace
To a tortured souls mind

i find that stanza my favorite and also quite true too. i can relate to this piece and especially this stanza because i feel as if dreaming can take away somewhat of the pain, but they never do last. well, job well done! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Wow thats beautiful