Very very nice poem...keep up the good work

Oh SARA...you're far too young to be locking your heart and never letting anyone in again. I may be old...but I remember my first love very well...and the pain I felt when she betrayed my trust in her. But you know what? It's 35 years later now...and she's one of my closest friends. Don't deny yourself the chance to find true love because of one person who didn't realize what he had. You'll be depriving someone else the opportunity of discovering what a priceless treasure you truly are :)
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Thanks for your sweet comment on my poem too :)

Wow so touching yet painful poem

"thank you for teaching me
Teaching me never to trust
never to let anyone in
yes my love ... yes it was you who broke me "

loved these lines more it had great effect on me

Heyy this poem is so good! you rock at writing poems! teach me! [lol]

A very touchy one. Know what, those who hurt you dont deserve you and its never your loss, it will always be theirs. I know, its hurts and its hard to trust again, but life is about spending time with the wrong people waiting for the right ones to come, maybe he was just another wrong one. Stay happy, nice work keep up

It's so sad .. it wasn't ur fault at all .. just ignore the people like them .. anyway .. great job 5/5

This is sad but dont block your entire future because of one wrong person.

Wow. i really like this. i know that sounds a bit twisted because its a sad poem but i mean i like how you did it.
awesome last lines. you described what everyone feels at, at least one stage in their lives.

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So lovely yet so sad. Awesome poetry.