My silent romeo- a death of a lover

by Gizmo   Feb 28, 2008


My silent romeo,
on the hills of moutfield bay,
the beautiful words of love,
seem to be just too far away.

i'll speak with you through teardrops,
a silent bitter-sweet lullaby,
i see you in the morning light,
and in the stars, of the starry sky.

what i would not give for a day;
a day of words from the heart,
but you have gone a year or so,
and the words-i don't no where to start.

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  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    This poem is amazing. I like the way it was put together and how it flows so easily. The only thing I saw were a few spelling errors, but other than that everything is utterly breathtaking. Great job once again.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    In the last line it should be " know " not no.

    YOu did a wonderful job with this poem. Such an amazing way you put the words together, and they had such emotion. (:

    It actually made me smile, even if that may not be a godo thing to say. Just because I liked it so well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great imagery in this sad yet beautiful poem
    You are a poet indeed

  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    Beautifully written! OMG your second stanza is terrific!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Excellent...

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