Excellent...

Beautifully written! OMG your second stanza is terrific!

Great imagery in this sad yet beautiful poem
You are a poet indeed

In the last line it should be " know " not no.

YOu did a wonderful job with this poem. Such an amazing way you put the words together, and they had such emotion. (:

It actually made me smile, even if that may not be a godo thing to say. Just because I liked it so well.

This poem is amazing. I like the way it was put together and how it flows so easily. The only thing I saw were a few spelling errors, but other than that everything is utterly breathtaking. Great job once again.