A soliders wife

by Gizmo   Feb 28, 2008


She closes her eyes through tears,
a fake smile-a broken heart-sad eyes,
the things she knows hes seeing,
she lies down on her bed off lies.

a letter crumpled, wet through tears,
just 2 recieved over 3 long years,
'please come home, i don't want you to die,
i'm writing this letter- a soliders wifes lullyaby.'

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Although different countries, this is probably the very same thing many people are thinking over here.

    It's a poem that crosses boundaries in the form of love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow, I really liked this. It's amazing how so few words/lines can give so much emotion and insight to what a person's feeling.

    Amazing job, keep it up darling

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow this is an amazingly moving piece with a great flow

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Any one who would read this poem wud feel sometjin in his heart
    it really moves peoples feeling
    amazin job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work i love it specially last part

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