Comments : I Couldn't Possibly

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    This poem is really different than all of my others but its just how i was feeling at the time
    i hope u like it but be honest
    thanks =)

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    I like this a lot. it is very different but something about it flowed well. i liked how u sounded so sure and yet so doubtful at the same time. well done! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow! I really loved this. I lived this for awhile. I know exactly what you were saying in here.

    So I am stuck here just waiting
    Waiting for something
    But not for you
    I couldnt possibly be waiting for you because I swore I would never do this again
    I refuse to let you mean this much to me
    So ill continue to lie to myself
    Continue to try to replace you with these distractions

    ^^^I LOVED these lines. They were so strong and emotional. you have a great talent for expression. Keep it up and feel free to check out my work. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by shantavia

    This poem go i love omg this is excetally how i feel too wow omg so touching and meaningful if thats a word but anyways ur a great poem writter 10/10