This poem is really, really good! I really liked it.

I really love it James and I am glad that I have had a chance to read it, I could really connect to it, and I really really like the goodbyes to your friends, very touching indeedy :)..
Bubzzxxx ('Thea')

Wow, I love how you start it and end it, very well written! 5/5

Thats very strong poem. thanks for your comment anyway.

the goodbyes are touching, the poem itsself is touching. xx