by deadly sun Feb 28, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Here we march, this day come now |
by Hear You Me
I love the comparisson between colour in the first stanza, and the later reference to colour with 'canvas' holds great imagery. PLUS the poem is just overall brilliant =D, poignant |
by HvN
Nice poem, great ryme. 5/5 |